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The Promises And The Threat by ~the-beautiful-red:iconthe-beautiful-red:



And he said to her;

I love you,
I'd give to you my world,
I'd die again a million times to know that you're my girl


And he lied to her;

He promised,
He'd never break her heart,
But while she slept he went and tore her entire world apart


And he promised her;

He'd hold her,
Til the end of heavens time,
And he threatend that his promise would never ever die
©2007-2009 ~the-beautiful-red
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:iconnoodle-soup:
This is absolutely beautiful.

Im in awe.

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:iconsilverangel38:
woah... I don't quite get it.. ??

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:iconmeeden:
beautiful with a heartf full of tears - wonderfully written :silentkitty:
:iconpurple-x-spoon:
u have a wonderful style of writing that i really enjoy

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:iconbelligerentfucker:
woah, this is goodsum* I really like how its written. it is (how do I put it?) ... hmmm.... oh I know, its good (goodsum*) !!!
:iconbedlamdream:
I love this, it's very good.

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