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memories of you seem all to real
to be but just a memory
i feel you breathing feel your heart beating
but it doesn't beat for me

to look once more into your beautiful eyes
you would captivate my soul
to have you hold me my world would be still
this pain i'd feel no more

memories of you etched into my heart
the words you used to say
from heaven you were given to me
but this world it took you away

i don't want to close my eyes
in fear ill feel this heartache
i don't want to fall asleep
in fear ill never wake

you were all i ever wanted
and i had you for a while
but you came and you left and ruined me
though you never saw me cry

and i your absence i fell so far
so far i think i died
and it only just occured to me
our first kiss was goodbye
©2006-2009 ~the-beautiful-red
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you always were and will forever be
the sweetest chapters of my dreams
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awe da poem is really nicely written'... ur a good poet...so keep da work up dude!~

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People dont Love someone to Lose 'em, they Love 'em to Live with 'em...
thank you :) xox

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What The Hell Am I Doing Here?
...I Don't Belong Here

And She Thought That Happiness Was A Mess That Sat On Her Doorway
:) you're welcome, welcome forever!~ love...

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People dont Love someone to Lose 'em, they Love 'em to Live with 'em...
Sadly sweet, nice job.

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thank you xox

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What The Hell Am I Doing Here?
...I Don't Belong Here

And She Thought That Happiness Was A Mess That Sat On Her Doorway
I like this one a lot. it seems very deep 5 Stars!!!

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Take just what I came for... then i'm out the door again
thanks you.. yay 5 stars for me!!! :) hehehe xox

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What The Hell Am I Doing Here?
...I Don't Belong Here

And She Thought That Happiness Was A Mess That Sat On Her Doorway

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